wo kaun thi...
Wo kaun thi...
anjaane main kabhi dkhoke se
kabhi chhupe kabhi itraake
kabhi sharmake wo patli si
mere dil ko lubha jati thi
pehli baar jab dekha aisa
laga jaise mere uper wo
kuch jadoo kar gayi
wo nakhre ke sath uska
dheere se machal jaana
phir kabhi samandar ki
lehar ke sath dagmagana
bachpan se lekar jawani tak
sath khele hai sochta hu
ki ye khel kab tak khelenge
lagta hai hamen wo
kahin peechhe chhod jayenge
jitni door bhi dekho wo
nazar aa jati hai
aadha samay mere sath
bitati hai aur
aadhe samay aasman main
chhup jaati hai..
aisa kaisa sath hamara ki
main tumhe dekh nahin sakta
har dam mujhe mahsoos karati ho
ki tum yahi ho mere sath ho
mere pass ho hamesha
rahi ho hamesha rahogi
wo subah subah ki taazi
hawa ke saath uska chale aana..
aur shaam ke darr se
uska chale jaana
ye silsila to sadiyon ka hai
jo pichhle saat janmo se chal raha hai
aur chalta rahega
ye khel na kabhi
khatam hua hai aur na hoga.
main uske intezaar main
har subah aahen bharoonga
aur jab wo aayegi aakhen band kar ke
uska deedar karoonga
bas yahi tamanna hai
ham aise hi aankh micholi ka
khel khelte rahe
kabhi koi aanch na aaye
aur tum kabhi hamse juda na ho
meri patli si roshni ki kiran is milan ki koi raat na ho
posted by Sarry @ 8:49 PM
15 comments
15 Comments:
this is top stuff, man!
im highly impressed :)
is this really written by u[:o]
well, i felt like writing something for u too
haye aapki shayari ke hum diwane ho gaye...
bade bade shayaron ke kalaam fasaane ho gaye..
lagta hai aaj to sheher ke khaali saare mehkhane ho gaye...
jaane kyun dil kehta hai aap sabse sayane ho gaye!
i screwed it up in an attempt to rhyme it i guess!! :P
nice poem ..:)
aisa lagta hain ki tum usse sachmuch visualise kar rahe ho :)
kya baat hain hamein bhi batao ..
ye kisse kissi ko batate nahin hain magar doston se chupate nahin hain :)
kaun hai woh... or shud i say kaun si wali ..
very well written... u made her beautiful... more than she ever was.
@Esha
no doubt u win dear
@DOC
Thanks for ur comments..ham bhi aapse bahut impress hai
@Rajkumari
han yar kabhi kabhi ham bhi apne hath aazma lete hai
@Deeps..
yar lagta tumhe post samajh nahin aayee..read it again there is something more than that..hope u understand otherwise there is some problem wid my post itself..
u will get ur answer there only..
@Bhav..i m sorry but the same applies to u too..u have to read it again to find ur answer...thats obviously a beautiful name but u will get it inside post itself
if this is so then roshni ya kiran. ishke alawa bhi ushke kai naam ho sakte hai... isiliye tum hi batao
~voice
@Bhav
vaise kiran naam ki ladkiyan achchhi hoti hai;)...roshni ka kuch pata nahin
kya baat hain aap bhi hath azama lete hain
waise new post kab ho rehi hain????
hmm cute poem.. sahi hai.. lagta hai janaab ko ishq ki bimari lagg gayi hai :DDDD
avoid image verification have some probs accessing bloggers site.. so can't go on with the image verification...
@Vinz
Ishq ki bimari mujhe abhi nahin ye to manufacturing defect hai kyunki apne paas ki har cheez se pyaar karta hu..
I removed the image verification ..now u happy:-?
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